The Dee Bore
Ancient, they say:

a Roman-straight road

bisecting lines

marking clusters

making grids.

There used to be a ferry man

tacking together the frayed edges

before this steel-edged rivet.

Upstream the city and the weir

downstream the flatlands and the face-whipping wind

home of fat-bellied planes bumbling in with high tech pollen.

The people pause

wait

peer along the canalised banks:

and, on cue, the silver line

crumples

becomes dashed. Salt meeting sweet.

A place to cut or fold?

The sea shrugs.

a Roman-straight road

bisecting lines

marking clusters

making grids.

There used to be a ferry man

tacking together the frayed edges

before this steel-edged rivet.

Upstream the city and the weir

downstream the flatlands and the face-whipping wind

home of fat-bellied planes bumbling in with high tech pollen.

The people pause

wait

peer along the canalised banks:

and, on cue, the silver line

crumples

becomes dashed. Salt meeting sweet.

A place to cut or fold?

The sea shrugs.
6 Comments:
"The sea shrugs." Damn, but you have a gift.
And you are a very generous person! Thank you, Jud.
Great photos & poetic imagery. Canal paths are so peaceful!
Thanks Paul! Yes, peaceful but with an edge of wilderness about it.
I like that minimalist narration, spare but apt!
Thanks Marly! I like minimalism.
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