The Dee Bore
Ancient, they say:
a Roman-straight road
bisecting lines
marking clusters
making grids.
There used to be a ferry man
tacking together the frayed edges
before this steel-edged rivet.
Upstream the city and the weir
downstream the flatlands and the face-whipping wind
home of fat-bellied planes bumbling in with high tech pollen.
The people pause
wait
peer along the canalised banks:
and, on cue, the silver line
crumples
becomes dashed. Salt meeting sweet.
A place to cut or fold?
The sea shrugs.
a Roman-straight road
bisecting lines
marking clusters
making grids.
There used to be a ferry man
tacking together the frayed edges
before this steel-edged rivet.
Upstream the city and the weir
downstream the flatlands and the face-whipping wind
home of fat-bellied planes bumbling in with high tech pollen.
The people pause
wait
peer along the canalised banks:
and, on cue, the silver line
crumples
becomes dashed. Salt meeting sweet.
A place to cut or fold?
The sea shrugs.
6 Comments:
"The sea shrugs." Damn, but you have a gift.
And you are a very generous person! Thank you, Jud.
Great photos & poetic imagery. Canal paths are so peaceful!
Thanks Paul! Yes, peaceful but with an edge of wilderness about it.
I like that minimalist narration, spare but apt!
Thanks Marly! I like minimalism.
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